Her peaceful smile is more of a ritual, rather than an expression of joy, as if she’s sacrificing a part of herself just to feel once more.
Her melodic voice is more of a hymn, rather than of dreary frequencies of sound, as if she’s summoning a divine being, one with an outstretched hand.
Her velvet skin is more of a map of scars, rather than of living cells, as if to remind her of every past tears and future fears that brought her down to her knees.
You might see just another exquisite woman, an embodiment of molten perfection.
But I see a force of nature. One that conquers the skies and silences the earth.
I see natural beauty at its finest. Beauty as it should be.
I see all that, and I hope one day someone will appreciate all that she is, and show her how her sole existence redefines beauty.
Really awesome! Good job! 😀
LikeLiked by 9 people
Incredible!!! Good job👌
LikeLiked by 9 people
really nice… 🙂
both the picture and verses..
LikeLiked by 9 people
Beautiful words and artwork. Thank you for sharing them. 🌵
LikeLiked by 9 people
Such admiration and love felt in each word..
LikeLiked by 8 people
Reblogged this on Moral Value Story and commented:
Do you able to see the value of beauty?
LikeLiked by 7 people
I love this: “her sole existence redefines beauty.” So clear and kind seen
LikeLiked by 7 people
Love, Love, Love this! Looking forward to reading more from you!
LikeLiked by 9 people
Reblogged this on Ancien Hippie.
LikeLiked by 6 people
Beautiful poetry and artwork – inspiring.
LikeLiked by 7 people
Artistic and heart felt. Beautiful posting.
LikeLiked by 6 people
“one that conquers the skies and silences the earth”.. The best part of the poem 🙂
LikeLiked by 5 people
Beautiful, if she is in real how beautiful she will be . Lovely expressions
LikeLiked by 5 people
Beautiful!!
LikeLiked by 6 people
You have a gift for using words to stir emotions and describe people so beautifully.
LikeLiked by 6 people
Oh, my word. How breathtakingly beautiful. What a gift you have. Thank you for sharing!
LikeLiked by 6 people
Absolutely exquisite. Beautiful words written like a melody. Thank you for stopping by and visiting, otherwise I would not have received this gift of poetry.
LikeLiked by 7 people
Very creative.
LikeLiked by 6 people
Oh, this is so gorgeaus. This girl reminds me of someone, I really hope she’ll find love one day.
LikeLiked by 6 people
Beauty lies in the eyes of the beholder
LikeLiked by 6 people
This is truly exquisite. I love the reference to the map of scars. Women endure and must have tiny emotional and physical scars of past poor decisions and maltreatment toward them. For some reason, your poem reminds me of a song ballad by, of all people, Alice Cooper called “Only Women Bleed.” Nicely done, Keith
LikeLiked by 8 people
Wow!! Stunning!
LikeLiked by 7 people
Real great style, a peculiar style, you’re a word artist, for you use them to superior elegance.
LikeLiked by 6 people
Hi, so um. The others are right. Of course this is beautiful. But I just read the first two posts on this blog and – I see her, but where are you, is what I’d like to say. The writing is beautiful, which is why I’m saying that.
LikeLiked by 8 people
Beautifully Soothing.
LikeLiked by 5 people
Really beautiful words! 😊
LikeLiked by 6 people
This is beautiful. I love the image you’ve chosen to go with it.
LikeLiked by 6 people
Beatiful 🙂
LikeLiked by 6 people
Strong pick up of vocabulary.
It was awesome😃😃😃
LikeLiked by 6 people
Are bhai, from which fairy is surrounded on your all existence. So much love in your poem.
LikeLiked by 5 people
Your narrative is romantic and existential; the prose reaches the sublime peak of beauty.
LikeLiked by 5 people
I love this piece, you see their inner beauty, potential, and outward beauty BEYOND their physical scars! It’s transcendent!
LikeLiked by 5 people
What words…what poetry! Amazing ! 🙂 🙂 🙂
LikeLiked by 4 people
Beautifully expressed.
LikeLiked by 5 people
Omg this is stunning!!! I love it 😊
LikeLiked by 5 people
“Her peaceful smile is more of a ritual”
That line right there just got me right away. Very beautiful!
LikeLiked by 5 people
I’m glad I’ve come across your blog. Excellent writings and this illustration is outstanding. Will come back often. Cheers
LikeLiked by 5 people
Drawn like a moth to a flame when I embrace your poetry it clothes my inner soul with love stories I’ve yet dreamed. You are very gifted with words. Much Love ~ Star
LikeLiked by 5 people
Shabash. Some of the most stunning poetry is written in honor of a woman. Love this one.
LikeLiked by 3 people
Wow!!!!!!!!
LikeLiked by 3 people
Your website is absolutely stunning, and so is your poetry!
LikeLiked by 2 people
stanza 3 kicks major ass! Write On!
LikeLiked by 2 people
word and picture go so well. simply epic
LikeLiked by 2 people
I really like the pictures that come with your poems. They are very creative! Do you “design” them yourself? (I have to ask). Thank you for stopping by my blog and for the follow. You do have a unique way to use words. And I see that poets are more dramatic than writers. So I will surely be coming back to read up on the drama. Wish you the best!
LikeLiked by 2 people
Beautiful post! And the visual picture is even better!! 😍 I love it!
LikeLiked by 2 people
This was just exquisite.
LikeLiked by 3 people
Remarkable post. Wow just WOW. Amazing!
LikeLiked by 2 people
Reblogged this on Orthometry.
LikeLiked by 2 people
This is great! Beautiful words, and I love the images too.
LikeLiked by 2 people
The artwork accentuates this artful piece of literature like a well-defined perspective point. I have read a few of your pieces and just love your writing style. I love to read and look forward to reading more when I have a few moments of time. It was a blessing! Thank you!
LikeLiked by 3 people
Beautiful words. Thanks for stopping by otherwise I might miss the chance of reading your excellent posts. Your posts seem like a flowing soothing thoughts gushing in your heart.👌
LikeLiked by 2 people
Beautiful poetry very inspiring beautiful image was all perfect matching with the title “Redefining the beauty.”
LikeLiked by 2 people
Beautiful!
LikeLiked by 2 people
Awesome. Your words are soul piercing…
LikeLiked by 2 people
Parabéns pelas palavras inspiradoras. Abraço.
“Congratulations on the inspiring words. Hug.”
LikeLiked by 1 person
Truely OMG
LikeLiked by 1 person
Just Beautiful 🙂
LikeLiked by 1 person
This is awesome, I hope to read more of your poems soon. Keep writing .🌹
LikeLiked by 1 person
Nice write up 👌 Thanks for following me 💐💐💐
LikeLiked by 1 person
Beautiful!
LikeLiked by 1 person