All that I Can See

I can see a dimly rainbow-lit bridge.

I can see us, wearing yesterday.

I can see a middle-aged architecture alley, with gargoyles staring at us.

I can see the whole place wondering aloft a cloud, right next to me.

I can see a bench, two lovers, and a blinding light that I mistake for the sun.

I can see her wearing an outstretched night sky, a black silk dress. Her hair is strewn all over the sky today, filled with clouds.

I can see galaxies exploding in her eyes.

I can see stars collapsing, others being reborn, deep down in her eyes.

I can see her lips, and mistake them for that fine line separating the sky and the ocean. Once they part, she swallow in every drop.

I can see valleys covered in ice, with a raging fire underneath.

I can see the shadow of the universe, trapped in her eyelids, hymning our story.

I can see the moon in one hand, the sun in the other, and when she move, she’s the darkness and light.

I can hear a pounding heart, giving rhythm to reality, while pumping rivers of fantasies into my own veins.

Thatโ€™s what I can see today, and it feels like I havenโ€™t seen anything yet.

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81 Comments Add yours

  1. Amunala says:

    i come in peace*offering a handshake*
    Beautiful piece indeed.

    Liked by 13 people

    1. ironmic215 says:

      The words visually took me to another realm

      Liked by 8 people

  2. Lovely, lovely, lovely! ๐Ÿ‘

    Liked by 12 people

  3. unuecopartio says:

    She is definitely most lovely and worthy of our ability to witness. ๐Ÿ™‚

    Liked by 12 people

  4. bunchup says:

    Metaphorical and interesting. Thumbs up.

    Liked by 10 people

  5. Nena says:

    So beautiful! I felt my heart pounding;)

    Liked by 10 people

  6. mitchteemley says:

    Sweetly unpredictable. More!

    Liked by 9 people

  7. I can see a lovely post

    Liked by 7 people

  8. So very creative! Can’t wait to read more ๐Ÿ™‚

    Liked by 9 people

  9. Deb says:

    And that was just today! Each day brings new visions…you express them effortlessly and magically, continue to tell us all that you can see! ๐Ÿ™‚

    Liked by 7 people

  10. It’s so beautiful, thanks for it.

    Liked by 7 people

  11. Debbie L says:

    Wow, that was amazing! We just visited a Planetarium so that makes your words even more visual to me.

    Liked by 8 people

  12. God Bless you my dear friend. Let his Peace dwell on you. Amen Hallelujah Praise his Holy Name.

    Liked by 8 people

  13. Pat says:

    This was very inspiring, and takes me to many places which permits me to see more clearly. Thanks for the message ๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ’ƒ

    Liked by 7 people

  14. aruna3 says:

    Wonderful lines. Wearing yesterday… here is some internet problem so I can not read all your posts.

    Liked by 4 people

  15. aruna3 says:

    Oh now your full poem, I am reading. Every lines touch the heart. Good combination between nature and love. You’re an amazing writer.

    Liked by 4 people

  16. Swetha M says:

    This is crazy fantastic! Your thoughts are dreamy. Thanks for sharing!

    Liked by 6 people

  17. reocochran says:

    Wow! Lovely list of beautiful sights. We are blessed with good eyes. Smiles, Robin

    Liked by 5 people

  18. Invigorating. Simply beautiful.

    Liked by 6 people

  19. Prerna says:

    Loved your writings.

    Liked by 6 people

  20. akansha1602 says:

    Splendid work..well done

    Liked by 6 people

  21. Vidushi says:

    Wow! Really, it’s beautiful. You wrote it so well and all I can say is- I just loved it. ๐Ÿ™‚
    I can see a whole new and different world of writing.

    Liked by 6 people

  22. Brunda says:

    Wow! Such a beautiful piece of work! I was where the guy in the picture sits! beautiful, breathtakingly beautiful ๐Ÿ™‚

    Liked by 5 people

  23. Lady CAS says:

    You’ve done it again! I had to nominate you for a liebster award because of it. https://myastheniagravisladycas.wordpress.com/2016/07/15/the-liebster-award/ should you choose to accept it please follow the above link and enjoy! ๐Ÿ™‚

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  24. This is a brilliant line
    ‘I can see us, wearing yesterday.’
    Lovely

    Liked by 5 people

  25. ๐ŸBoltie Crystal Blossom๐Ÿ says:

    This is so beautifully written! I wish I can write and express my emotions like that. This is pure art. You just earned a follow.

    Liked by 6 people

  26. shambhavi31 says:

    It’s beautiful! An imagery so exquisite, nature in your words, love in your lines are expressed really well! ๐Ÿ™‚

    Liked by 6 people

  27. michnavs says:

    the repetition of lines is so beautiful. .the lines speak of itself as it is…wonderful.

    Liked by 5 people

  28. sailajaP14 says:

    This is beautiful!

    Liked by 5 people

  29. My Heart Your Shelter says:

    This is so perfectly beautiful. I look forward to reading more.

    Liked by 4 people

  30. Yours Truly says:

    So wonderful! The woman who inspired these words must be very lovely indeed but also very lucky to have someone in her life that can appreciate the depth of her inner and outer beauty.

    Liked by 4 people

  31. Bowled over ๐Ÿ˜ฎ …this is sensational …beautiful …m so grasped with it wanna read it again n again

    Liked by 4 people

  32. Sarah Shafni says:

    ๐Ÿ’

    Liked by 4 people

  33. Susan says:

    “Wearing yesterday…”Beautiful !
    You’re very talented!

    Liked by 4 people

  34. You took me with you, beautiful!

    Liked by 3 people

  35. wonderful composition, really wonderful

    Liked by 4 people

  36. Vinnie Dime says:

    Awesome ! I love this one !!! You can really feel the love through this poetic descriptions !

    Liked by 4 people

  37. I love the imagery you carry throughout the poem, I get a strong sense of a beautiful, sexual mother nature. Looking forward to seeing more of your writing. ๐Ÿ™‚

    Liked by 4 people

  38. Wow, Mugilan! Beautiful poetry. And I love what you wrote for your profile, too. Will be following, and I look forward to reading more. ๐Ÿ™‚

    Liked by 4 people

  39. C.D. Belacho says:

    Beautifully written

    Liked by 4 people

  40. Just now getting to read yours… love this post. I know this feeling. Just when I think I see stars, I see stars behind stars. And behind them. Just when I think I know my husband of 23 years, I don’t know him at all. It’s an amazing journey, this life. Aloha!

    Liked by 4 people

  41. Jennifer L Thorpe says:

    Beautiful!

    Liked by 4 people

  42. mismei says:

    i love your twitter feeds! and now reading your blog, I’m in awe! lovely. keep it up!

    Liked by 4 people

  43. blkkat49 says:

    Beautifully written. Your words are so visual. I love the line “I can see us, wearing yesterday. ” A very enjoyable read.

    Liked by 5 people

  44. Little Voice says:

    What a lovely poem. I love the night pix on the left.

    Liked by 4 people

  45. Becky says:

    Very nice. You have a gift for setting the stage of your poem well with imagery that invites your reader to understand and join you. Great work.

    Liked by 2 people

  46. boozilla says:

    Sorry for the delay in responding to you. What wonderful poems you write! I look forward to reading more for sure.

    Liked by 2 people

  47. I have drowned into it. Awesome man ๐Ÿ‘Œ

    Liked by 2 people

  48. Lovely post with pristine words โค

    Liked by 2 people

  49. I literally get lost in your reading your writing and images ! It is such a fabulous escape…

    I have nominated you for an award!

    Kind Regards and feeling grateful – K

    Liked by 2 people

  50. Shailja... says:

    Hey,I love your poems and found them really versatile,interesting,deep and relatable to me.I have nominated you for the โ€œVERSATILE BLOGGER AWARDโ€๐Ÿ™‚๐Ÿ™‚.
    Keep Up the good work,!
    https://everwonderedwhy.wordpress.com/2016/09/10/the-versatile-blogger-award/
    Go through the above link to see the rules for the award.
    Have a good day and an awesome September!

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  51. chris jensen says:

    I see with my eyes wide shut a world within a love destiny!

    i also see that you dropped in for a read,

    thank you

    in a manly hug chris

    Liked by 2 people

  52. B says:

    What gorgeous imagery! I really enjoyed this post. This is my first time dropping by your blog and I’m looking forward to more beautiful posts. Thanks so much for stopping by my blog!

    Liked by 2 people

  53. maribey says:

    Beautiful! Many greetings to you, Marion

    Liked by 2 people

  54. Dave says:

    Impressive imagery, I love it ๐Ÿ™‚

    Liked by 1 person

  55. Mari says:

    Wonderful work! Thanks!

    Liked by 1 person

  56. Nini says:

    Reading your poems reduces stress ๐Ÿ˜

    Liked by 1 person

  57. tziviaeadler says:

    your i’ve seen list is glorious.

    i want a rainbow-lit bridge.

    Liked by 1 person

  58. The Cat says:

    Thank you so much for following me because it enabled me to discover your blog, great stuff. I particularly like the picture on ‘All that I Can See’ lovely. I’m looking forward to you stopping wandering for a moment or two to write another piece. I hope that you enjoy my blog as much as I did yours.

    Purrs,
    The Cat

    Liked by 1 person

  59. biswa44 says:

    Oh my goodness …

    Liked by 1 person

  60. That is such a beautiful string of words

    Liked by 1 person

  61. Wow! I simply love this one โค
    I can see the moon in one hand, the sun in the other, and when she move, sheโ€™s the darkness and light.

    You write exceptionally beautiful. More power to your words ๐Ÿ™‚

    Liked by 2 people

  62. fatimah748 says:

    You are amazing, you must teach me how you are so fluid with words.

    Liked by 1 person

  63. Mr. Mel says:

    Many would have been content to speak of love. You have brought it to life. Wonderful writing. You have great eyes.

    Liked by 1 person

  64. KNIGHT says:

    Metaphors are out of the world loved it ๐Ÿ˜

    Liked by 1 person

  65. Wonderful words. Just love your blog!

    Liked by 1 person

  66. pennydanger says:

    Your words are so gorgeous! You must have a beautiful heart.

    Liked by 1 person

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