I can see a dimly rainbow-lit bridge.
I can see us, wearing yesterday.
I can see a middle-aged architecture alley, with gargoyles staring at us.
I can see the whole place wondering aloft a cloud, right next to me.
I can see a bench, two lovers, and a blinding light that I mistake for the sun.
I can see her wearing an outstretched night sky, a black silk dress. Her hair is strewn all over the sky today, filled with clouds.
I can see galaxies exploding in her eyes.
I can see stars collapsing, others being reborn, deep down in her eyes.
I can see her lips, and mistake them for that fine line separating the sky and the ocean. Once they part, she swallow in every drop.
I can see valleys covered in ice, with a raging fire underneath.
I can see the shadow of the universe, trapped in her eyelids, hymning our story.
I can see the moon in one hand, the sun in the other, and when she move, she’s the darkness and light.
I can hear a pounding heart, giving rhythm to reality, while pumping rivers of fantasies into my own veins.
That’s what I can see today, and it feels like I haven’t seen anything yet.
Simply love this!
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i come in peace*offering a handshake*
Beautiful piece indeed.
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The words visually took me to another realm
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Lovely, lovely, lovely! 👍
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She is definitely most lovely and worthy of our ability to witness. 🙂
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Metaphorical and interesting. Thumbs up.
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Superb !
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So beautiful! I felt my heart pounding;)
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Sweetly unpredictable. More!
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I can see a lovely post
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So very creative! Can’t wait to read more 🙂
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And that was just today! Each day brings new visions…you express them effortlessly and magically, continue to tell us all that you can see! 🙂
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It’s so beautiful, thanks for it.
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Wow, that was amazing! We just visited a Planetarium so that makes your words even more visual to me.
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God Bless you my dear friend. Let his Peace dwell on you. Amen Hallelujah Praise his Holy Name.
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This was very inspiring, and takes me to many places which permits me to see more clearly. Thanks for the message 😊💃
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Wonderful lines. Wearing yesterday… here is some internet problem so I can not read all your posts.
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Oh now your full poem, I am reading. Every lines touch the heart. Good combination between nature and love. You’re an amazing writer.
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Beautiful!
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This is crazy fantastic! Your thoughts are dreamy. Thanks for sharing!
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Wow! Lovely list of beautiful sights. We are blessed with good eyes. Smiles, Robin
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Invigorating. Simply beautiful.
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Loved your writings.
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Splendid work..well done
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Wow! Really, it’s beautiful. You wrote it so well and all I can say is- I just loved it. 🙂
I can see a whole new and different world of writing.
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Wow! Such a beautiful piece of work! I was where the guy in the picture sits! beautiful, breathtakingly beautiful 🙂
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You’ve done it again! I had to nominate you for a liebster award because of it. https://myastheniagravisladycas.wordpress.com/2016/07/15/the-liebster-award/ should you choose to accept it please follow the above link and enjoy! 🙂
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This is a brilliant line
‘I can see us, wearing yesterday.’
Lovely
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This is so beautifully written! I wish I can write and express my emotions like that. This is pure art. You just earned a follow.
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It’s beautiful! An imagery so exquisite, nature in your words, love in your lines are expressed really well! 🙂
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the repetition of lines is so beautiful. .the lines speak of itself as it is…wonderful.
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This is beautiful!
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Beautiful.
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This is so perfectly beautiful. I look forward to reading more.
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So wonderful! The woman who inspired these words must be very lovely indeed but also very lucky to have someone in her life that can appreciate the depth of her inner and outer beauty.
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Bowled over 😮 …this is sensational …beautiful …m so grasped with it wanna read it again n again
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💝
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“Wearing yesterday…”Beautiful !
You’re very talented!
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You took me with you, beautiful!
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wonderful composition, really wonderful
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Powerful!
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Awesome ! I love this one !!! You can really feel the love through this poetic descriptions !
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I love the imagery you carry throughout the poem, I get a strong sense of a beautiful, sexual mother nature. Looking forward to seeing more of your writing. 🙂
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Wow, Mugilan! Beautiful poetry. And I love what you wrote for your profile, too. Will be following, and I look forward to reading more. 🙂
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Beautifully written
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Just now getting to read yours… love this post. I know this feeling. Just when I think I see stars, I see stars behind stars. And behind them. Just when I think I know my husband of 23 years, I don’t know him at all. It’s an amazing journey, this life. Aloha!
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Beautiful!
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i love your twitter feeds! and now reading your blog, I’m in awe! lovely. keep it up!
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Beautifully written. Your words are so visual. I love the line “I can see us, wearing yesterday. ” A very enjoyable read.
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What a lovely poem. I love the night pix on the left.
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Very nice. You have a gift for setting the stage of your poem well with imagery that invites your reader to understand and join you. Great work.
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Sorry for the delay in responding to you. What wonderful poems you write! I look forward to reading more for sure.
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I have drowned into it. Awesome man 👌
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Lovely post with pristine words ❤
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I literally get lost in your reading your writing and images ! It is such a fabulous escape…
I have nominated you for an award!
Kind Regards and feeling grateful – K
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Truly captivating
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Hey,I love your poems and found them really versatile,interesting,deep and relatable to me.I have nominated you for the “VERSATILE BLOGGER AWARD”🙂🙂.
Keep Up the good work,!
https://everwonderedwhy.wordpress.com/2016/09/10/the-versatile-blogger-award/
Go through the above link to see the rules for the award.
Have a good day and an awesome September!
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I see with my eyes wide shut a world within a love destiny!
i also see that you dropped in for a read,
thank you
in a manly hug chris
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What gorgeous imagery! I really enjoyed this post. This is my first time dropping by your blog and I’m looking forward to more beautiful posts. Thanks so much for stopping by my blog!
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So beautiful!
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Very touching!
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Beautiful! Many greetings to you, Marion
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Impressive imagery, I love it 🙂
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Wonderful work! Thanks!
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Reading your poems reduces stress 😍
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your i’ve seen list is glorious.
i want a rainbow-lit bridge.
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Thank you so much for following me because it enabled me to discover your blog, great stuff. I particularly like the picture on ‘All that I Can See’ lovely. I’m looking forward to you stopping wandering for a moment or two to write another piece. I hope that you enjoy my blog as much as I did yours.
Purrs,
The Cat
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Oh my goodness …
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That is such a beautiful string of words
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Wow! I simply love this one ❤
I can see the moon in one hand, the sun in the other, and when she move, she’s the darkness and light.
You write exceptionally beautiful. More power to your words 🙂
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You are amazing, you must teach me how you are so fluid with words.
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Many would have been content to speak of love. You have brought it to life. Wonderful writing. You have great eyes.
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Beautiful blog!
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Reblogged this on Creative Writing Course.
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Reblogged this on O LADO ESCURO DA LUA.
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Metaphors are out of the world loved it 😍
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Wonderful words. Just love your blog!
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Your words are so gorgeous! You must have a beautiful heart.
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Limited sight
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To be read while listening to Tom Waits’ “Watch Her Disappear”.
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Fantastic choice of metaphors… Simply fantastic
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I especially love “I can see the moon in one hand, the sun in the other, and when she move, she’s the darkness and light.” ❤
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Obrigada seus artigos como sempre muito bons. Parabéns já estou ansiosa pelo próximo artigo. Beijos.
“Thank you for your articles as always very good. Congratulations, I’m already looking forward to the next article. Kisses.”
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This is a powerful piece. You should submit it to a journal or publication!
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remind me again, how do you do it?
mind=blown.
🙂
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Wow! This is so so so so good. Loved it♥️♥️
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That’s amazing.. Your blog is of my interest.. I will check it out one by one…
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A delicious description of the night sky works for me.
Thank you for following one of my blogs.
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Powerful! Thank you.
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You really have a gift… you not only write words but make sure each and every one of them is actually felt.. love your posts.. please keep sharing!!
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A unique post and a superb photo. Thanks for following my blog.
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Wonderful images! Thanks for following my blog.
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I have one word after reading this….WOW!♥️ Absolutely lovely!
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❤️ stunning
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Very cosmic way with words! Thank you
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Another amazing and beautiful poem!
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So very beautiful 🙂
So much imagery created within common place things we all know! I love it!
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Wonderfully crafted and brilliant imagery coming from the deepest source!
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This is way beyond really nice – entrancing, uplifting – yes! 🙂
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Uplifting words with a powerful image!
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You pull me right in to your story reminding of the magic that my hubby & I have even after 15 years together. Thank you!
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Well said!
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What a beautiful way of expression. Loved it
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Great post
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Wow, so much before the day had begun, so mystical, so intriguing, so raw. Your talent is indeniable🦋
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