Some will push me higher, while others will drag me down.
Some will soar with my thoughts, while others will crawl with my shadows.
Some will fill me up, pouring pieces of their own soul into me, while others will empty me with bitterness and their noise.
Some might say that I am a wordsmith, who lubricates words with a pen filled with my own seawater tears so I could write an ocean of love for her.
Others claim that I am a fraud, hiding in between lines.
Some might say that I am a narcotic in the rawest form, you can get high on my words, the kind of high you would get when stardust runs in your bloodstream and galaxies tangled in your mind.
Others claim that I am a drug dealer, and you are that drug addict who keeps coming back for more.
Some might say that I am a human wreckage, who writes suicide notes that turns pain into the most beautiful form of literature that deserves to be placed in the museum.
Others claim that I am a serial killer of words, who brutally murdered the Mother Nature as my pages filled with heinous, savage crimes committed in the name of love.
Some might say that I am a guardian angel, my words can heal your broken heart and mend your shattered soul with patchwork more beautiful than ever before.
Others claim that I am a God’s favourite cupid, and my words are the most deadliest weapon known to humanity when you immerse in my calligraphy of love.
Some might say that I am a divine being of flawlessness, when you chant my words as if they were a mantra that sounds like the prayers you have never heard before.
Others claim that I am a sorcerer, and my words are hypnotic spells seducing your soul to be a slave to my words.
I can see two types of people. One that recognizes beauty, values authenticity and savours art. Another that is caged in reality, senses normalized and just another weave in a pale shawl.
See I found a way to escape time, whilst you are still a slave to its chimes. And while you accuse me of madness, blasphemy, hypocrisy, I can only hope that one day you will see the world through my very own eyes.
Beautiful! Everyone have a beautiful way to see the world! Both side of coins helps to toss the improvement! Where appreciation helps in rising confidence and criticism helps to improve! What matters the most is never let rise enter your head and don’t allow the downfall to tear you apart! Walk on your path and do what you wish to as in both circumstances you are the decider of your decisions as the world only knows to give suggestions whether you want it or not!
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Words… words. I love them, flowing freely and on point. You write so well 😊
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Beautiful.
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I applaud your beauty, honesty, depth and love. Amazing words that had me enraptured from the first, beautiful 💖
Thank you for taking the time to follow my expressions, I am truly honoured and grateful.
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That so says it, doesn’t it. To which I can add nothing.
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Beautifully written… Love the choice of your words
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Words are sometimes
like heavy metal pieces
that fall onto the floor
with the loudest of all noises,
devoid of meaning and
shallow at their very core,
but like you I want more:
I want words to spring out
of a fountain of beauty
exuding nothing but truth,
so I thank you for the follow
to make me feel a bit less hollow.
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Superb! loved it!
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I’ve lost my words… Just too beautiful 💚
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Love this!
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I absolutely love this piece.
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Read a few of your pieces and thought they were really good and thoroughly enjoyed reading them. You have a unique style, and it all flows beautifully. You’ve just earned yourself a new follower! Sx 🙂
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Beautifully written about how people have different views for your writings and the way you write is always heart touching.
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Love your work! Utterly beautiful.
~ Novice cum wannabe writer ^-^
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Nice one
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Hey ! I loved this line
” I am a wordsmith, who lubricates words with a pen filled with my own seawater tears “
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This is a beautiful piece I love how you put words together💜
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“… Just another weave in a pale shawl.” That’s an evocative phrase.
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It stood out for me as well…. 🙂
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“See I found a way to escape time, whilst you are still a slave to its chimes. And while you accuse me of madness, blasphemy, hypocrisy, I can only hope that one day you will see the world through my very own eyes”
I hope I’ll be allowed to as well.one day 💕
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Appreciated bro
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Very deep.
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Lovely and intriguing post! Thank you for following ThusNSuch.
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Brilliant. How amazing it is that everyone sees different faces of your being, just like a diamond caught different lights on each facet.
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Having had a taste of your writing, I think I will like seeing the world through your eyes.
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Really loved the lines…and the post altogether. Beautifully written. Thanks 🙂
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You’re a great poet. I’ll bring you up!
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This is beautiful! So lovely!
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See I found a way to escape time, whilst you are still a slave to its chimes – downright superb, original, and a pleasure to read! To your question, I am none. The balance between the two polarities. 🙂
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My dear this is an interesting post, but I use this comment just to thank you to be my follower. Here there is a Christmas gift for you: https://my-anasa.com/2018/11/17/807-followers/
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Great poem, Mugilan. Thanks for the ‘follow.’ I’ll look forward to your posts.
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Reblogged this on dave94015 and commented:
To see beyond the reality of life and discover deeper meaning and beauty…
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Nossa palavras inspiradoras. Parabéns.
“I love your inspiring words. Congratulations.”
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Thanks for accepting and following my blog. I’m available to read your post at my convenient time. You have such an interesting topic I will love to read in your blog. I still remain the simple blogger.
#PATRICKSTORIES
Peace✌and Love ❤
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Fantastic and amazing poem. Just short and straightforward. You are a phenomenal person with such incredible poem. Am so glad that I had to comment on it. I hope you have a wonderful and relaxing Sunday.
#PATRICKSTORIES
Peace✌and Love ❤
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You have passion and talent. God bless you to find a resting place for your heart and wander no more. Keep writing and it will keep you.
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Your writing is so smooth and beautiful, like a mountain torrent. It’s wild, different and free. As I read your blog, I can almost imagine all those beautiful words flowing from your mind to paper, I can see your stream of thoughts in your writing and I think it’s beautiful.
Round of applause :👏 👏 👏 👏
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You write beautifully! You truly have a gift of using the best words in the most exacting way. Thanks for following my blog. I’m so glad you found something helpful there. Please request to join our FB writers group if you’d like. Look for real time writers. We’d be honored to have you!
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Thank you for your encouraging words Laura. I do not post as often as I would like, but I do write daily. I am a Fitness Pilates Professional, so my time is very busy, clients, classes and my own personal fitness regimen.
I am interested in connecting with other Christ centered writers. I would
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Sorry Muligan I posted this asking for Laura to respond. BT I do ENJOY your passion of word expression, as I posted before, keep writing your soul. Blessings to you.
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Sounds like you are pretty busy, but still making time to write. Good for you. Please feel free to connect with my Facebook writing group, Real Time Writers. You’ll have to answer a couple of questions to be approved, but everyone is welcome!
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Reblogged this on http://www.BetterYourWellness.com and commented:
Something to ponder pertaining to the health of the mind and perceptions of a healthy psyche. I recommend this blog reposted here as noteworthy and healing. It teaches us to look at others with open perspective. –bowmanauthor
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Absolutely amazing and heart touching! You write so beautifully, with so much honesty and depth…I find it hard now to express the right words, to thank you for your wonderful posts, for the way you connect with people through your creations. Just thank you! And my gratitude for following my blog! 🙏❤️
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Hi I loved your words of being a wordsmith who lubricates words with pen. Beautifully said. I’m an artist too…you wouldn’t believe the things that are said around me sometimes…
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So many comparisons for a writer! That’s a rich imagination. Beautiful.
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Sadly I’m a bit of a mix!
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Hello Mugilan Raju. Your blog is beautiful.
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Lovely poem
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The symbolism in your words touches me. Your art inspires my own, I’m already reaching for a pen! Thank you and please keep sharing your art with us.
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This is a stunning work. Thank you following me.
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Hypnotising words.
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Magically written words!
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This is a stunning, truthful, and beautifully written piece!
Thanks for the follow.
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Such a beatifully clad piece of art.
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What wonderful juxtaposition of adversarial points of view! This was really well written. Thank you for sharing!
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We better to know how to use every word. Interesting.
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You have a fire about your writing. It is a slow warmth that over takes your thoughts. It sparks one to be introspective and empathetic.
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Wow. This has a nice sharp bite to it. You’re definitely a breath of fresh air man☁
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Excellent writing. I love the part where you say “I can see two types of people. One that recognizes beauty, values authenticity and savours art. Another that is caged in reality, senses normalized and just another weave in a pale shawl.”
Well done 👌
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Simply Beautiful 💕💕
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Agree with all the positive comments above. I am not sure who are those some who might not like your writing but I know I am a part of that “some” who has become a fan of your writing. Kudos!
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Wooowwww this is great
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You’re not my guardian angel! 😡 Are you picking a fight?
Hahaha joke 😂
I’m not sure if I’ll push you higher. But I’ll definitely won’t drag you down. For now, I’ll be a follower.
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Thanks for the follow.
Which one r u? You ask
Expecting an answer I bet
Which one are you? I ask
We have probably met.
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Hi Magulan Raju..
I nominate your for Mystery Blogger Award. ☺
https://florabino.wordpress.com/2019/04/04/mystery-blogger-award/
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I’d say you are both a creator of magic and an outlet of pain, and we are both the content observer and the distasteful commenter. None is good nor bad, though one is always preferred. In the end I can only speak for myself, and everything about me is a walking contradiction. What you take from that is up to you. I think your poem is beautiful, but the only one that needs to think so is you. You are your greatest masterpiece.
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I loved the independence with which you write. You pour your heart out while writing and that’s what gonna take you ahead. Keep writing man. All the best! 🙂
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Your emotions are intense, your words seductive. Thank you for visiting my thoughts and images.
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Your honesty is refreshing. Your vulnerability a source of strength.
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Some might say that I am a wordsmith, who lubricates words with a pen filled with my own seawater tears so I could write an ocean of love for her.
Best one…. Loved the whole thing…
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Oh my god, that’s beautiful! Really resonated with me; ringing truth in a profound way. Gorgeous!
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Love every word.
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Its wonderfully written… Im a fan 🤤✨
Also ..hey,, if you’d spare a minute to read out poem.. It’ll be an honored : https://iamjatinnanda.wordpress.com/2019/04/11/beneath-my-heart/
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Beautiful! Look forward to reading more of your poetry.
Many thanks for stopping by my Travel and Photography blog.
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I found Ur work very unique and out of the box. I really enjoyed it. You got talent keep up the good work
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Beautiful! I’m glad you found my little corner of the world and thanks for following my blog. Welcome to the fence jumpers. @sheilamgood at Cow Pasture Chronicles
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GORGEOUS!!!
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Waouuh huge words and wise ….Congrats
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Loved this!
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Subhanallah! This was really a marvellous piece. Keep up the good work
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This is very beautiful.
I love it. Thank you for sharing it with us, and thank you for following my blog! 😄
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Woah, blow my mind. See I am not good understanding poetry, but you are too good. So modern, so young, perfect choice of words, while I was reading I am so excited how you will close the verse and you did it perfect! Good job. Glad I found your blog.
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This is beautifully written. I feel your emotions in this.
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Your poetry skills are lit man. So raw and authentic and I see a very important theme being drawn throughout the poem: don’t live your life for what others say about you… march to the beat of your own drum. I resonate with that.
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What’s important, I think, is how do you see your words? You have a gift of descriptive language–similes, metaphors, word painting. It looks like you believe your perspective is unique and sometimes rubs people the wrong way. What would stop you from writing what YOU see, not what you think others think you see… see?
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So profoundly true ….. so profoundly timeless! ❤️
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wow. Again 🙂
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You got me hooked! Simply beautiful creation. Thanks again.
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Beautifully expressed thoughts. I love the free flow of feelings.
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You’re so young, you’re so professional. Really a kind of a young robot. Maybe if you’d live, not a woman, for a while (some years) with a real woman, and listen to a freely speaking stumbling book: more soil and burning not only wind and unctuous and rapacious wet: because nobody is any “which one”, and you sound unreliable. I personally prefer reality when somebody’s fantasy kills existences.
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Priceless! You write richness into a poor world! Thank you for sharing your literary gifts!
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Reblogged this on Caila Marie De Jesus Claveria.
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Bravo. 💕Duality in Existence. The balance must be kept 😉
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Beautifully written!
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Thank you for visiting my site recently. I am enjoying reading through a few of your posts and look forward to more.
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Wow! You are amazing. Your writing is powerful. Thank you for sharing your world with those of us less talented.
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Wow this is so deep
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This is dope; justifies “narcoticwords”.
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Wow! Incredible I love it. So much expression, I felt the words as I read them🦋
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Nicely written
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interesting read
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I see beauty, I see love, and I see acceptance. I love this piece. Thank you Mugilan.
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I loved that part where you wrote “Others say I am a drug dealer, but you are the drug addict that keeps coming back to me”✨🥂🌹
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