Redefining Beauty

Her peaceful smile is more of a ritual, rather than an expression of joy, as if she’s sacrificing a part of herself just to feel once more. 

Her melodic voice is more of a hymn, rather than of dreary frequencies of sound, as if she’s summoning a divine being, one with an outstretched hand.

Her velvet skin is more of a map of scars, rather than of living cells, as if to remind her of every past tears and future fears that brought her down to her knees.

You might see just another exquisite woman, an embodiment of molten perfection.

But I see a force of nature. One that conquers the skies and silences the earth.

I see natural beauty at its finest. Beauty as it should be.

I see all that, and I hope one day someone will appreciate all that she is, and show her how her sole existence redefines beauty.


56 Comments Add yours

  1. vvjna96 says:

    Really awesome! Good job! ๐Ÿ˜€

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  2. umaiyaalblog says:

    Incredible!!! Good job๐Ÿ‘Œ

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  3. Teena says:

    really nice… ๐Ÿ™‚
    both the picture and verses..

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  4. Beautiful words and artwork. Thank you for sharing them. ๐ŸŒต

    Liked by 8 people

  5. Such admiration and love felt in each word..

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  6. Yoshiko says:

    Reblogged this on Moral Value Story and commented:
    Do you able to see the value of beauty?

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  7. leelah saachi says:

    I love this: “her sole existence redefines beauty.” So clear and kind seen

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  8. U C Alison says:

    Love, Love, Love this! Looking forward to reading more from you!

    Liked by 9 people

  9. Beautiful poetry and artwork – inspiring.

    Liked by 7 people

  10. Artistic and heart felt. Beautiful posting.

    Liked by 6 people

  11. Sarga says:

    “one that conquers the skies and silences the earth”.. The best part of the poem ๐Ÿ™‚

    Liked by 5 people

  12. bhaatdal says:

    Beautiful, if she is in real how beautiful she will be . Lovely expressions

    Liked by 5 people

  13. Joyful2bee says:

    You have a gift for using words to stir emotions and describe people so beautifully.

    Liked by 6 people

  14. Oh, my word. How breathtakingly beautiful. What a gift you have. Thank you for sharing!

    Liked by 6 people

  15. Sharron says:

    Absolutely exquisite. Beautiful words written like a melody. Thank you for stopping by and visiting, otherwise I would not have received this gift of poetry.

    Liked by 7 people

  16. Oh, this is so gorgeaus. This girl reminds me of someone, I really hope she’ll find love one day.

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  17. daramemon says:

    Beauty lies in the eyes of the beholder

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  18. Keith says:

    This is truly exquisite. I love the reference to the map of scars. Women endure and must have tiny emotional and physical scars of past poor decisions and maltreatment toward them. For some reason, your poem reminds me of a song ballad by, of all people, Alice Cooper called “Only Women Bleed.” Nicely done, Keith

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  19. Nena says:

    Wow!! Stunning!

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  20. Real great style, a peculiar style, you’re a word artist, for you use them to superior elegance.

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  21. Hi, so um. The others are right. Of course this is beautiful. But I just read the first two posts on this blog and – I see her, but where are you, is what I’d like to say. The writing is beautiful, which is why I’m saying that.

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  22. Beautifully Soothing.

    Liked by 5 people

  23. Really beautiful words! ๐Ÿ˜Š

    Liked by 6 people

  24. Brenda says:

    This is beautiful. I love the image you’ve chosen to go with it.

    Liked by 6 people

  25. soul voice says:

    Strong pick up of vocabulary.
    It was awesome๐Ÿ˜ƒ๐Ÿ˜ƒ๐Ÿ˜ƒ

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  26. aruna3 says:

    Are bhai, from which fairy is surrounded on your all existence. So much love in your poem.

    Liked by 5 people

  27. gspottedpen says:

    Your narrative is romantic and existential; the prose reaches the sublime peak of beauty.

    Liked by 5 people

  28. Lady CAS says:

    I love this piece, you see their inner beauty, potential, and outward beauty BEYOND their physical scars! It’s transcendent!

    Liked by 5 people

  29. Shailja... says:

    What words…what poetry! Amazing ! ๐Ÿ™‚ ๐Ÿ™‚ ๐Ÿ™‚

    Liked by 4 people

  30. milliethom says:

    Beautifully expressed.

    Liked by 5 people

  31. lizskincare says:

    Omg this is stunning!!! I love it ๐Ÿ˜Š

    Liked by 5 people

  32. C says:

    “Her peaceful smile is more of a ritual”
    That line right there just got me right away. Very beautiful!

    Liked by 5 people

  33. Colltales says:

    I’m glad I’ve come across your blog. Excellent writings and this illustration is outstanding. Will come back often. Cheers

    Liked by 5 people

  34. Drawn like a moth to a flame when I embrace your poetry it clothes my inner soul with love stories I’ve yet dreamed. You are very gifted with words. Much Love ~ Star

    Liked by 5 people

  35. Becky says:

    Shabash. Some of the most stunning poetry is written in honor of a woman. Love this one.

    Liked by 3 people

  36. janewking says:

    Your website is absolutely stunning, and so is your poetry!

    Liked by 2 people

  37. Rob says:

    stanza 3 kicks major ass! Write On!

    Liked by 2 people

  38. Tanveer Rauf says:

    word and picture go so well. simply epic

    Liked by 2 people

  39. griote says:

    I really like the pictures that come with your poems. They are very creative! Do you “design” them yourself? (I have to ask). Thank you for stopping by my blog and for the follow. You do have a unique way to use words. And I see that poets are more dramatic than writers. So I will surely be coming back to read up on the drama. Wish you the best!

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  40. cmoas says:

    Beautiful post! And the visual picture is even better!! ๐Ÿ˜ I love it!

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  41. fatimah748 says:

    This was just exquisite.

    Liked by 3 people

  42. Remarkable post. Wow just WOW. Amazing!

    Liked by 2 people

  43. fictionspawn says:

    This is great! Beautiful words, and I love the images too.

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  44. The artwork accentuates this artful piece of literature like a well-defined perspective point. I have read a few of your pieces and just love your writing style. I love to read and look forward to reading more when I have a few moments of time. It was a blessing! Thank you!

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  45. Shayra says:

    Beautiful words. Thanks for stopping by otherwise I might miss the chance of reading your excellent posts. Your posts seem like a flowing soothing thoughts gushing in your heart.๐Ÿ‘Œ

    Liked by 2 people

  46. Kelly soares says:

    Beautiful poetry very inspiring beautiful image was all perfect matching with the title “Redefining the beauty.”

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  47. yzabelwrites says:

    Awesome. Your words are soul piercing…

    Liked by 2 people

  48. Kelly soares says:

    Parabรฉns pelas palavras inspiradoras. Abraรงo.

    โ€œCongratulations on the inspiring words. Hug.โ€

    Liked by 1 person

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